Much improved

Just after complaining about my ability to write dialogue, I receive an email from a friend who just finished reading a draft of UNEXPECTEDLY, MILO.

Finished the book last week.  It's a good story - well written and you're a very good dialogue writer.  The dialog between Emma and Milo is excellent.  Even though I recognized your own views in a lot of that dialog, I could still picture the conversation happening.

Nice to hear that my hard work may have paid off.